Script

Tomos walking through train station and to an alleyway where the camera fades out and then into Tomos ringing on the doorbell, a few seconds later a man opens the door.

Man:Hi Tomos, How was your journey?

Tomos: Yes the journey was good, but err..too long

Man: Well come on in, your room is upstairs on the left

Tomos walks up the stairs whilst the man walks down the hallway downstairs, Tomos walks into his room looks out the window then sits down on the bed and looks worried and confused about his predicament

We wanted to keep the script brief because we did not want a lot of dialogue as it would make a more mysterious atmosphere, a rushed conversation may suggest that something is not quite right in the house or the man may have been doing something before Tomos rung the bell. 

A longer period of dialogue would also mean there would be less tension in the scene, we wanted to focus on the setting and the character and what they were doing and not what they were saying to one another.

CF